Walking through the woods , drenched in rain,
Suddenly I felt something , twas pain,
A group of first years passed by me,
And i couldn't feel anything but jealousy,
They had four years of fun left still,
and I have to leave in a year ,against my will;
And i didn't care to find any cover
Goodbye my friends , the golden days are over......
We laughed together,we played together
Your presence made me feel like I will be alone never,
Now whenever we are together
I am always afraid whether,
I could live without such friends,
Is this how it feels when college life ends,
Trapped in a cubicle , a thought will always hover,
Goodbye my friends , the golden days are over......
If only I were granted a wish
I would wish to turn the time again
When we walked for 2kms to reach the lecture halls,
When life didn't mean a computer and four walls,
When every other person looked like a friend,
When we wished , "let this time never end",
But the truth only, makes me shiver,
Goodbye my friends , the golden days are over......
9 comments:
arey baap re..dunno wat to say... saale phod hi diya... too gud.. i was almost in tears
Keep writing.. i m lookin frwd to it
shatter more keys
ty ty
"When life didn't mean a computer and four walls...."
bang on kala..bang on
hats off ...
i m touched ...
u r nt a blogger ....
u r more dan dat ...
a lot more dan dat ... :)
But hey , we still have time left ..
Cheers buddy...
u rock :)
well... seems all budding phodu poets eh?? newaz too gud.... guess i dun wanna say gud bye 2 dis collg after all....
keep up!!
@vikramaditya,Debaleena : ty for the response , I am totally flattered
A beautiful poem; and very heartrending too!!!
And I especially liked this part : "When life didn't mean a computer and four walls,
When every other person looked like a friend,"; ....at times i do feel that in,some respect, these computers have done us more harm than good.....but then, life goes on..
n hey "Don't cry that it is no more; instead, be happy that it ever was.."
That's the only respite for nw! :)
Nice Post!!Keep rolling.
hmm......never knew a poet was hiding amongst us.....
gud...gud....u hv given words to our emotions.....
sahi hai bhai...ulti..keep posting
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